Paragraphs:
v
Yesterday, I spent the
whole morning riding on my bike. I am starting to get well trained until the
race comes. Then, I spent the rest of the day watching the cycling on
television. Talking about bikes, have you got yours mended yet? We have to
train harder if we want to win the race.
v
I desisted totally to the idea of
inviting Darlene and Jackie to spend the holiday with us. Darlene is as miserable
as ever, and Jackie never comes to visit us. Anyway, I’m sure you don’t want to
hear about this again, so let’s get back to those holiday plans without them.
We need to have everything organized before Friday, so please come to my home
tomorrow to talk about it.
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Analysis: when the teacher told us to
put some sentences in context, I started to write simple paragraphs just to
describe the situation in which they happened. I did pay attention to the
gender of each paragraph, but they are just a part of what it should be a
complete dialogue, in the first case, and a complete letter in the second one.
I did not pay attention to the first
sentence of my paragraphs which should contain the main topic. Apart from that,
I tend to start writing without thinking about a special audience or the
register.
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