Argentinian Salad Bowl.
Bolivians, Paraguayans and Chinese immigrants are the largest groups which move to our country for labor reasons, bringing with them their cultural habits. In our country there is no much restriction about immigration. Bolivians, in their majority, have found a good job opportunity in greengroceries and, moreover, they outnumber Argentinian greengrocers. Talking about Paraguayans, they have adapted to wide variety of jobs in our country and, noticeably, they are closest to our cultural habits. Chinese immigrants, on the contrary, have moved to Argentina to set enormous supermarkets all over the country. Their culture is evidently different to our, and the majority of them seem not to care about adaptation. These groups of immigrants are increasing in our country, and we have to adapt ourselves to their cultural manners in their working environment.
Argentinian Salad Bowl.
Bolivians, Paraguayans and Chinese immigrants are the largest groups that move to our country for labor reasons, bringing with them their cultural habits to which we have to accept and adapt. In our country there is no much restriction about immigration. Bolivians, in their majority, have found a good job opportunity in greengroceries and, moreover, they outnumber Argentinian greengrocers. Talking about Paraguayans, they have adapted to wide variety of jobs in our country and, noticeably, they are closest to our cultural habits. Chinese immigrants, on the contrary, have moved to Argentina to set enormous supermarkets all over the country. Their culture is evidently different to our, and the majority of them seem not to care about adaptation. These groups of immigrants are increasing in our country, and we have to adapt ourselves to their cultural manners in their working environment.
In the body of the paragraph and in the conclusion sentence you wrote about adaptation and it is not mention in the topic sentence.
ResponderBorrarIn the conclusion sentence I think that you should have specified which are "these groups of immigrants" that you mention
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